Sunday, August 30, 2009

Post Your SAT 10 Writing Assignment Here

Justin, you already did this so don't worry about where you put it. The rest of you.... I am WAITING for you to put your compositions in the comments section of the post.

These are assignments/sentences you were given:

1. Describe my classroom.

2. I did not think that she/he was attractive.

3. My vacation was bad.

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

1)) Ms.Jone's room is cold as Alaska so that boys love to go into her class, but girls are afraid to go. Even mosquitoes are afraid to com in because they are feared to be freezing. However because of the passion of studying and teaching, as time goes, no one feels coldness.

2)) I had to say at house during vacation. It was so boaring that I felt a day is like a week. I was blue all the time. There was no excitement for a month. I wanted to hike Wol Chul mountain which is I hated to climb. Every dreams that I had had a scene of playing with my friend. It was such a horrible vacation.

3)) Every one said that he is handsome however I do not agree. One thing for sure is ihe is not my type. I don’t like a man who has a long hair, too much muscles, and not kind. Some said that bad boy is attractive but not to me. He has all these 3 factors, so I don’t feel he is attractive.

lovely Anna said...

1.Ms.Jones' class room is located on the second floor of HIS and it is numbered as 208. It is big enough to hold seven desks, six for students and one for Ms.Jones, and a set of projector. Its floor and the ceiling are made of white marble and there are huge black and white borards adhere to the wall, besides Ms.Jones' desk. Also, there are several posters made by studenst are stick on each wall and some of them are talking about class rules. Two hall passes are hung next to the white board and each class' chart is stick right next to the hall passes. There also is a cabinet in the back of the classroom, in which various things are kept.

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Nicky하트뿅 said...

1. Describe my classroom.
Ms. Jones' room is full of pieces such as poster of her rules in the class, and students' projects for their grade. There are two cabinets at the back of her class room. In the first cabinet, there are books, sissors, and color pencils. The other cabinet has color paper that students may use for their project or festival. There are three boards at the back and one black board that has three white board at the front.

2. I did not think that she/he was attractive.

She is not pretty in and out. She has pimples on her face and her eyes are dim. Her face tone is black as charcol, and she has really ugly teeth. How smelly her teeth is! I even do not try to talk with her. Plus, she has strnange characteristic as matching her face. She does not allow to rent her own possesive, any of them. She does not go to bath, and does not brush her teeth. Her hair is curly as luffa.

3. My vacation was bad.

I went to a zoo with my family in vacation time. I was excited, because i loved animals except for birds. When we arrived at the zoo, we entered to the zoo. First we took the place where dolphin show was starting. When we just reached the dolphin show, the guard came and said that the show had finished. I was sad, but we went to the lion. However lion was not there because they needed to sleep. I was so sad, and we went to the birds. I hated it but i thought that the birds would not attack me because they are in the cage. But all the sudden, the cage had broken, and the birds flew so highly. I felt disgusting. i tried to ran away from it, but then the eagle came closer to me. It came to me and the bird attacked me. I was frustrated, and tried to ran away from the bird.

Anna 뿅뿅 said...

Even though he was famous for being hansome and gentle, he acually was not. He was not my type and he did not have any consideeration for girls. For that reason, he was not attractive to me

Anna again! said...

3.During the vacation, i had to stay at home the whole time. I could not even go out for a movie or anything. The only thing I demand excitement was sleeping. My vacation was not exciting at all, it was bad

In-young said...

Hello Ms. Jones!
I am In-young!

1.Describe Ms. Jones' classroom.

-Ms. Jones' classroom is placed in front of Paco's classroom. When you open the yellowish brown door, at first, you will see the room which is white and black mixed color. The wall is painted with white color and the black posters which are about literature are sticked on the wall. Ms. Jones' desk is placed in the corner, and her desk is filled with so many notes and books which hint how busy she works. Students' desks are placed confront of Ms. Jones' desk as 3 groups. Generally, students study by looking on the screen which is instituted on the blackboard. Also, because of the air-conditioner which is hanging from the ceiling, students can take cool classes everyday.


2.I did not think that she/he was attractive.

-I did not think that he was attractive because of his that kind of poor attitude towards everything and everytime. In fact, his glossy black hair and clear-cut feature make him look like a handsome guy. However, one's looks are not everything. He is always rough in his speech even though there is teacher or adult, and takes younger students' properties just like money or electronic products. He does not study hard, just concern about his outlooks in front of girls. For his poor and dreadful characteristic, I never thoungt that he was attractive.


3.My vacation was bad.

-My vacation was bad even though I back to my deer sweet home after 8 monthes absence. The source of all the evils was my bad condition: my achilles inflammation and enteritis. I had decided to be home just for two weeks, so that, time at home is as same as gold to me. BUT, what was all that! The day of vacation ceremony, I had got achilles inflammation, and inflammation maintained for one week. After the inflammation, I consoled myself with the thought that I still had one week at home. However, incessantly, I had got enteritis and I had to go to hospital for curing my sickness. The sudden attack of diseases made my vacation so terribly and let me never forget it.

jasberry said...

1. describe my classroom
when i arrive at miss jones' room on every morining i feel like i become a ice cream. the cool winds from miss jones' lovely air conditinal is very cold so i feel like i am in the cave. miss jones' room is always lika cave because it is very dark. however, the only one place, miss jones' desk is bright because of her computer. it is like a one piece of light from cave. her room described with the posters that show how hard her students work.
2. i did not thin that he was attractive.
he was totally not attractive. he was kind of handsome because he has very cute face. however his behavior always make me want to punch him. he thinks he is better than everyone and he act like that. when he said he is so handsome so every girls loves him, i want to say that he is not atrractive so he should shut his mouse.
3. my vacation was bad.
my vacation was bad because of my lazyness. i planed my vacation perfectly but it was not perfect. i tried to exercise but my lazy body was tried to stuck in my bed like a big stone on the ground. also every time i tried to study, i felt like my brain become jelly and can't think any thing. so my vacation was passed with lazy body and brain.

Jenny said...

1)Even one step into Ms. Jones room can make you feel the chilliness of the air conditioner. When you finally come into the room, the first thing that grabs your eyes would be the posters on the walls as if wallpaper. In all the corners of the room, you can see the effort of both the students and the teacher.
2)The first glance at the girl told Dan that she was not anything he imagined. The numerous freckles on his blind date's face reminded him of connect-the-dots. Every time she spoke, the flash of her braces made him squint. All of this, including her horse-like laughter, reminded him of ta barn.
3)Everything that happened during the summer break seemed to be so bad, Camon thought that she was starring on a prank TV program. During the summer, she spent the days working in a convenience store, under a broken air conditioner.


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